Apr 3, 2024
You could break up your second paragraph into shorter sentences. Same with the paragraph about your dad. Only suggestions. Your English is very good. A nice piece!
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Written by Sylvia Mulholland JD,MFA
AneriCanadian half Ukrainian trademark attorney & writer. Sloan Foundation Fellowship from AFI. Published three novels, two traditional publishers. On BlieSky a
